This week for our writing activity we wrote a paragraph about how starving we would be if we were on the the way finders boat. Here is the paragraph I wrote:
I clench my stomach as it roars from hunger. My mouth waters at the thought of delicious food and clean water. I look around me, it seems the others are thinking the same thing. "How much longer until we find land?" I thought to myself. I lay down and close my eyes hoping to sleep the hunger away, although the waves are not helping. Maybe there is a storm coming?
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